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Review: The Ossians

Connor Alexander’s baby is a band – The Ossians. A Scottish indie rock band that isn’t main stream enough to attract the great record labels but successful enough to be noticed by the local press, who are constantly asking for interviews.

Starring his sister, his girlfriend and his best friend, Connor decides that it is time to increase The Ossian’s fame by touring the north of Scotland, and find out what their home country is really all about. Figuring that none of the members of The Ossians had ever been further north than Aberdeen, they embark on a journey that does not primarily aim at recruiting a larger audience, but to define their identity as a band and as individuals.

Leaving Edinburgh, the journey takes them to St Andrews, Arbroath, Kyle of Lochalsh, Fort William, and eventually back to the civilized world, to Glasgow. So, what is Scotland? A picturesque tourist attraction, weather beaten beaches, caves and maritime wildlife? Or a dreary industrial country, with no chance of ever being truly independent? Maybe a bit of both, maybe a bit of everything.

Johnstone cleverly interlinks the fate of the band with the different mood of the places in Scotland where they play, and the people they meet. The book effortlessly slips in and out of characters’ perspectives, and we realize that Johnstone’s characters are as diverse as their country. Connor, who is unwillingly bullied into being a drug courier; his best friend and his sister who are suddenly discovering that they feel more than just friendship for each other; and his girlfriend, who desperately tries not to loose her job as a teacher despite a runaway student of hers suddenly showing up at their gigs.

The warning on the cover is not in vain: this book certainly contains Sex, Drugs, and Rock’n’Roll. But the most dangerous thing about it is surely that it is addictive to the point that you’ll find yourself hectically checking your watch to make sure you’re not late for this evening’s soundcheck.

King of the Commons

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Oona King is pretty cool. It’s not often I’d say that about a 40 year old ex-MP, but she is. As the second black woman in parliament (the first was Diane Abbott, elected in 1987), and an MP for the Labour party at just 29 she’d impressed me before I’d even met her, but then she told me about her love of dj-ing and house music. ‘I just love it, can’t get enough. I always will be a house music fan. I used to be a serious wannabe DJ, you know those people that are like “yeah yeah yeah, I wanna DJ, I wanna DJ”. I’ve still got my decks downstairs, that was my birthday present last year, I got a CD mixer. No yeah, I do love my house music.’

No longer an MP, but working in the media, Oona has recently published a book documenting her time in parliament, The Oona King Diaries: House Music. She lost her seat in the Greater London constituency of Bethnal Green and Bow in 2005 to George Galloway, founder of the party Respect and notorious Celebrity Big Brother loudmouth. Oona lost by 823 votes that night, from a previous majority of ten thousand: ‘When I lost the election I was absolutely devastated.’

 

 

 

 

 

 

 She doesn’t sound too brokenhearted, though, as she laughs and chats to me. ‘Winning my seat at Bethnal Green and Bow and losing my seat at Bethnal Green and Bow were two of the three best things that have happened to me,’ Oona says, ‘But the best thing that happened to me probably was finally getting my little boy, after so many years of not having a baby. A psychiatrist would have said I was conflicted… It’s a huge privilege to be the MP, and it’s also a huge privilege to not. I’ve got my life back. I almost feel when I’m in my living room in the evening it’s like I’m engaged in an illicit activity. I couldn’t give it up now. I couldn’t see my husband for more or less a decade. I can’t go back to that sort of life.’

 

As a consequence of Oona’s support for the Iraq war there were, as she says, ‘lots and lots of crazy things’ alleged about her during the 2005 elections. ‘It was put around that I funded the Israeli army; a lot of my Muslim constituents were that told I wanted to ban halal meat; that I was at war with Islam.’

 

I ask Oona to comment on the number of women, and of black women, in the House of Commons. She acknowledges that the situation is bad. ‘It is not a representative democracy. That’s the holy grail, really, for modern politics; or should be. Two black women – that’s black or Asian, there are no Asian women – out of 650 odd MPs is a diabolical state of affairs… When I was growing up I assumed we’d won all those battles, but in fact, you know, over 80% of MPs are still men, and the battles have not been won.’

 

I ask her whether the House is as female-unfriendly as is reported. ‘I was angry about working late virtually every night. The fact is that the House of Commons discriminates against anyone who wants to have a life and discriminates against anyone who has caring responsibilities, and those are disproportionately women; although not only, I mean it discriminates against men who want to see their children. So it does have real modernisation problems; and want to see it change further.’

 

With a Jewish mother, an African-American father, a grandmother from Glasgow and an Italian husband, Oona is perfectly placed to comment on the future of multiculturalism in Britain, and I ask her how community cohesion can be achieved, something which she has worked intensively for: ‘A lot of people say multiculturalism has failed. I don’t agree with that at all. Multiculturalism is a statement of fact. Multi – many – cultures living side by side, and that’s what happens in London.

 

‘The point is, it can’t just be side by side, there has to be integration. Trevor Phillips (a black Labour politician and current head of the Commission for Equalities and Human Rights) warned of parallel lives, and I certainly see dangers that need to be addressed, and so I think that the way forward is to make sure that government funding and that sort of thing emphasises the issues that bring communities together, not that divide them. We need to… encourage people to interact more than they have in the past.’

 

Another issue of concern to the Oxford community is that of homelessness. I ask Oona what is being done to address the problem. ‘The government has put in place the biggest house building programme for decades. The problem is it can’t solve the problem overnight, because the problem itself has got greater. There have been demographic changes. There are more single people living alone, that used not to happen.

 

‘You’ve got my granny for instance, living in a 3-bedroom flat that her family lived in before, because people live longer. That housing unit isn’t available, whereas before it would have been. So there are lots of different reasons why there has been a reduction in the housing supply. The government’s doing what it needs to do, which is to build more houses, and it can’t do it quickly enough in my view.’

Oona has said previously that she ‘jumped up and down and cried with happiness’ when she heard the news that London had won the 2012 Olympics, and I ask about her hopes for Britain. ‘My hope is that we show why we won the bid, and we won the bid because we said that we would have an Olympics for the world; in London and in Britain we reflect 300 countries or more that live in this one country, so if we could have a lasting cultural legacy and also have infrastructure…so we don’t have white elephants but we do have ordinary people benefiting from the building project, and also that we become a healthier country, otherwise we’re all going to die from obesity.’

 

Oona is apologetic. She can’t talk any longer because she has to pick up her little boy: having left the House of Commons, she’s clearly ‘got her life back.’

Review: The Need for Uncertainty

Any exhibition entitled ‘The Need for Uncertainty’ may prompt fears of artistic pretensions and pomposity. However, Mircea Cantor’s new sculptural installation at Modern Art Oxford is both enchanting and profound. The exhibition is the first in a new series of commissions produced by pioneering international artists. Hidden away in the Upper Gallery, Cantor’s installation literally brings fairy tale and metaphor to life.

The focus of the exhibition is a series of enormous golden cages, constructed like a succession of giant Russian dolls, one inside the next. Two peacocks inhabit this labyrinthine space, moving freely in front of the viewer. The cages create an optical illusion; from certain angles it seems that the birds are free and we are imprisoned.

 

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It is a simple, lyrical touch which makes no pretensions other than to absorb the viewer into Cantor’s fairy-tale world, only to return them to modern reality with a sudden jolt. 

Close by, a flying carpet hovers high above the peacocks’ cage. Created by Romanian weavers, it entwines traditional geometric motifs with angels, butterflies and airplanes. Arguably a more perplexing and eccentric idea, the carpet is less iconic than Cantor’s gargantuan bird cage but still manages to perpetuate the theme of improbability and the possibilities of creative force.

A large photographic work is also hung alongside the two installations: a Transylvanian tree which has blossomed into a miraculous flower sculpture at its trunk. The design is commonly used to decorate weaving spindles but certainly provokes uncertainty when returned to its natural woodland setting.

According to Cantor, ‘there is an inflation in the value of certainty; we need the opposite’. His exhibition certainly provides an alternative, questioning the limitations of freedom and the exploring the creative possibilities of uncertainty.

 

4 stars out of 5

In essence, Cantor’s ideas are captivating and inspired, but his flying-carpet and photographic work lose some of their impact when placed side-by-side with the main feature of the exhibition. Yet the three elements work well, seemingly rooted in traditional European fairy tales while keeping a sharp eye on 21st century reality.

Theatrical Thrills

The audience, I have found, is the biggest annoyance about going to the theatre.

 

My last visit was to see The Phantom of the Opera, and so, after a traffic jam on the Oxford Tube, and a mad dash on the bus, I arrived at Her Majesty’s Theatre praying that nothing else would go wrong.

Wishful thinking. I had the displeasure of being seated next to a foreign couple that, despite being pointedly asked to shut up in their own language (Spanish as it happens. Yes I speak Spanish. Look at me go, putting my degree into practice), spent the entire performance asking who was doing what, where and why. Yet this was not the only ambient noise accompanying the musical acts. Oh no, I was also treated to the melodious sound of munching.

Overpriced ice creams sold during the interval were all I used to buy at the theatre. Now, though, it seems like the theatre has become the cinema, where people feel the need to eat their own body weight in junk food during the show- much to the annoyance of everyone else. The icing on the cake, no pun intended, was the sudden drenching of my boyfriend by a glass of wine treacherously balanced by a rather sloshed Essex girl behind us, prompting incessant giggling throughout the duration of the next scene. Admittedly I thought it was hilarious. He disagreed. Damply.

When I could see round the heads of the people in front of me, who were hanging over the balcony railings like their lives depended on it (rather than were threatened by it), the show was spectacular. Mind you, I was so slow that my companion had to point out where the phantom was appearing on the set, as I was often looking in the completely wrong direction owing to the distractions provided by my fellow theatre-goers. That’s what I claim, anyway.

As a struggling student, I rarely have the opportunity to go to the theatre these days. Admittedly the Odeon suits my budget more, yet despite my whinging, I have come to the conclusion that if the show is enjoyed (as mine was, immensely) then the overpriced tickets suddenly don’t seem to be an issue. Just about. Plus, it still beats the cinema as a special night out, something which the slightly sticky, slightly mass- produced atmosphere of the cinema cannot hope to touch. The theatre has character and privavcy.

If ONLY no one else would turn up!

Mission Accomplished?

Two weeks ago, James Norrie wrote a comment piece comparing the Parisian student rebels of 1968 to their presumably apathetic and politically disengaged British counterparts in 2008. But what are the French themselves doing during the 40th anniversary of the student revolts?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Walking through a Latin Quarter swarming with tourists and bouquinistes, it is hard to imagine the violent scenes that took place here in May 1968. The French seem to have forgotten that millions of them marched against the establishment. Perhaps they have taken a leaf out of our book under the new Sarkozy government.

 

If you’re a bit rusty on your French history, let me enlighten you. On March 22, 1968, a group of students led by Daniel Cohn-Bendit carried out a seemingly innocuous protest in the Parisian suburb of Nanterre following the arrest of five students campaigning against the Vietnam war. This would escalate into the monumental movement that saw the shutdown of universities, the biggest workers’ strike of the century, and the eventual downfall of General de Gaulle.

 

Slogans such as the infamous il est interdit d’interdire covered the walls of the city. Eventually, students worldwide engaged manu militari against a stagnant society born of the aftermath of the Second World War, unease over the Algerian War, and the antagonism between youth culture and conservative mores.

 

Nowadays, what makes la une is Sarkozy’s latest gaffe, whether it be his texting during an audience with the Pope, his pleas to his ex-wife posted on the Internet, or the latest outfit that betrays his belief that he is actually Al Pacino in The Godfather. His je-m’en-foutisme, possibly stemming from a short-man-dictator-syndrome, is incredibly amusing, but slightly worrying in a country that prides itself on the spirit of revolution and individualism.

 

During the transport strike in November last year, polls showed for the first time that the majority of people supported the government rather than the strikers. Increasingly, the French are starting to sympathise with those of British sensibilities who view strikes as an effrontery to the stiff-upper-lip school of thought. ‘It is difficult to care about politics,’ says Bruno Veron, a second-year musicologist at the Sorbonne. ‘It’s all one long Big Brother episode. Politicians are celebrities and it’s only about image now. It’s disgusting.’ French students, once renowned for their political engagement, seem to have been put off by the new brand of Hello! Politics.

And it’s not as if French students have nothing to protest about. Merely to get a temporary post, virtually all of them are subjected to a typically poorly-paid internship related to their studies which amounts to near exploitation. And most have to do several of these even after graduation (sometimes in different sectors within the same company) before they are eventually hired. Consequently, they are forced to live with their parents until well after the embarrassing age of twenty-five.

 

I don’t know about you, but this doesn’t sound like my cup of tea, or, for that matter, anything like the idea of ‘liberté’ held so sacrosanct in the French constitution. A good number of Frenchmen and Frenchwomen head across the channel to London to find jobs, or else struggle for years before they get the golden ticket of a CDI (contrat de durée indeterminé). Add to that the fact that degrees in France are incredibly career-based and one is left with very few options in the job sector.

 

We should thank our lucky stars that we are free to choose relatively ‘useless’ subjects such as History and still become lawyers at the end. In a country with a red tape preoccupation bordering on fetishism, if you don’t have x qualification then you can’t get y job. So why are French students not building barricades on the Boulevard St. Michel?

 

Ironically, it was the events of May ’68 that led to this impasse in the students’ situation. In the aftermath of the uprisings, universities suffered from a political backlash. ‘The right did everything in their power to curb the autonomy of public universities such as the Sorbonne,’ says Régis Michel, head curator at the Louvre and visiting lecturer in Political Philosophy and Art at Northwestern University and UCL. ‘The grandes écoles [private establishments such as ENA or HEC] were encouraged to counter mutinous tendencies in leftist centres. We might well say the right succeeded, as the public education system is now in tatters.’

 

In spite of this hiatus in academia and political engagement, there is still hope for change. Interestingly enough, the depressed situation in French education is remarkably similar to the conditions pre-May 1968. Historians recognise the difficulty of pinpointing the causes of the uprising, precisely because it sprung from a general malaise amongst students due to differing factors.

 

‘The soixante-huitards felt like they had no real place in society. Above all, they had an overwhelming desire to change the world and to destroy the old values of the time,’ continues Régis Michel. Daniel Cohn-Bendit himself stated in an interview after the movement of March 22nd that students did not want to become the ‘cadres of tomorrow’ – a clear declaration of their refusal to be shoe-horned into nine-to-five jobs for the sake of it. Ten points if you spot the similarities with the status quo today. If Sarkozy continues to plummet in the opinion polls and ignores the ever more restricted opportunities for students, I wouldn’t be surprised if there was trouble down the line.

To be fair, French students do have one thing going for them: the vast majority do not pay tuition fees. At most, they pay about 100EU a year to cover administration costs – a mere pittance. What about les rosbifs? Doing countless internships isn’t obligatory, but we all know we’ll be about £12,000 out of pocket when we graduate. At least.

 

A thousand students or so demonstrated in London a few years back. But in reality, the lack of political engagement on the student level is, frankly, embarrassing. We can all play political parties at the various student associations at Oxford, but what about real involvement? Granted, Gordon Brown and George Osborne are about as inspiring as stick insects on valium, but George Pompidou wasn’t that much better, and we shouldn’t let ourselves be outdone by the French!

In May ‘68, students of our age assumed very real political responsibilities, and not just in France. There were also widespread protests in Belgium, Germany, Poland, Brazil, Czechoslovakia and Mexico, where 300 students were killed in the Tlatelolco Massacre before the Olympic Games. Students took to the streets to make their voices heard, and they were. Can we really say the same?

 

Given that the movement began with a small protest against the Vietnam War, it must be said there is something commendable about French conviction, whatever one’s views on strikes and protests. Better that than our own blasé attitude towards current events. And from what I hear, there is little sympathy among British students for the Iraq War. Perhaps we should take a leaf out of the Frenchman’s book, instead of sitting around discussing it over a pint in the KA.

When art meets advertising

Walking through Ephesus several years ago, a tour guide drew my attention to a dash of colour on the wall of a street corner. In blood red, hardly faded after thousands of years, I saw a small hand-print with a Greek inscription underneath. The rough translation: ‘come to our house for woman as beautiful as princess,’ was an ancient equivalent to the cards that call-girls post in telephone booths nowadays. It struck me then that twinned with the oldest profession was another occupation of striking venerability: the ad-man.

Of course, advertising has come a long way since crude graffiti was daubed on city walls. In fact, the ad-man’s ability to adapt to new technology has been impressive. Advertising started on its path to becoming a major industry with advent of the printing press, firstly with handbills and then posters. This also saw the concerns about its negative impact with the proliferation of adverts for quack cures. In 1836 the French newspaper La Presse pioneered paid advertising in newspapers, something the rest of European publishing was quick to pick up on.

The next leap forward came with radio. Although government took control of the airwaves early on in this country, the US took a different route. Early radio and TV shows like the US Steel Hour blurred the line between content and ads, slowly giving way to multiple sponsors in smaller sections; ‘commercials’. Television gave this a new sophistication as products fought for attention from increasingly jaded viewers. In 2006 a PricewaterhouseCoopers report estimated a worldwide value of £197 billion yearly, more than twice the NHS budget. Today we’re in the midst of the next technological revolution for advertising, as the Internet opens up new horizons of possibility and advertisers strain ever harder to reach their consumers.

While the poetic content of that Ephesian whorehouse advert may have been fairly low, the link between advertising and the arts is historically strong. In the nineteenth century department stores hired acrobats and clowns, and theatres carried adverts painted onto their stage curtains. Early twentieth century commercial illustrations have seen a resurgence in modern art and fashion. The bright colours and rosy cheeks of these  magazine ads have become an artistic style in themselves. Sometimes designs have  been copied, taken out of their commercial context and used for other purposes, like images of fifties housewives re-captioned to become emblems of feminine assertiveness. Elsewhere these styles can be reinterpreted in new work – the cover of last term’s etcetera, for example.

Advertising and the arts have brushed cheeks in the music industry too. Since the De Long Hook and Eye Co commissioned composers to put adverts to music in 1891, the jingle has been a ubiquitous part of our culture. The rock ‘n’ roll generation tried to reject this kind of commercialization, but right from the beginning their attempt was doomed. The Troggs, Marvin Gaye, The Supremes, Ray Charles and Otis Reading were among the artists who recorded Coca Cola commercials in the sixties, a practice so common it prompted the 1967 album The Who Sell Out, which interspersed real tracks with faux jingles. Part of the irony of the record was that The Who were themselves recording commercials at the time, and their faux adverts landed them in legal trouble from the companies they satirized.

Modern artists are frequently criticized for selling out when they allow their songs to be played behind commercials. But tell me I’m not the only person who was introduced to The Only Ones after watching those Vodafone ads? I’m sure the band wasn’t complaining – it sparked a whole new tour for the ageing punks. Film too has been consistently enmeshed with advertising – look at the way we pay for those classic adverts as posters, when once publications were paid to include them.

Film is particularly notable in this area for the use of ‘embedded advertising’, known as ‘product placement’ to you and me. Ironically one of the best known examples of product-placement, The Italian Job, wasn’t really anything of the kind. The maker of the Mini, BNC, was unconvinced by the project and the film’s makers had to buy most of the Minis they used. Fiat meanwhile grasped the potential immediately and provided as many cars as the filmmakers wanted – all the more amusing given far their cars were overshadowed by the tiny British vehicles. With The Truman Show, the topic of product-placement itself provided the material for a film of quality.

But just how much has advertising contributed to the arts? Are these examples of fruitful commercial cross-pollination anything more than scraps, morsels of beauty in a morass of mediocrity? Might it be the case that the corrosive influence which commerce has exercised through advertising is a baleful pull far greater than the positive push it has given?

After all, what exactly has advertising contributed to the world? 90’s ad-man Paul McManus described the industry as ‘all about understanding. Understanding of the brand, the product or the service being offered and understanding of the people (their hopes and fears and needs) who are going to interact with it’. However, this attempt to describe adverts as contributing to the sum of human intelligence is and the body of human knowledge is clearly unfounded. The best that could be said would be that publicists are informative, telling people about products they were previously unaware of and might find useful.

Even this is hard to swallow; for adverts do not tap into demand, they create it. This became clear during the debate over the ban on tobacco advertising. Tobacco lobbyists argued that cigarette advertising didn’t force anyone to take up smoking who would not have done so in any case. The (successful) advocates of the ban countered that statistical and psychological evidence clearly showed the impact of advertisements, and in any case, they asserted, companies would not care so much about the issue if advertising didn’t really work.

Advertisements fit into the economic category of deadweight loss: firms invest so heavily in advertising more to keep up with their rivals than for any inherent gain. It’s like when everyone starts standing up in the seating section of a rock concert: it would be in everyone’s best interest to reconnect backsides to seats, but once one person stands the rest have to follow suit.

From an artistic point of view perhaps the most corrosive effect of advertising is to devalue the creative effort: the prostitution of so many creative minds in intellectual projects they clearly do not believe in. The very principle that abstract ideas are meaningful could be at stake. This is what excised George Orwell most of all in his satire Keep The Aspidistra Flying, which contains that wonderful statement:‘advertising is the rattling of a stick inside a swill bucket’.

What then, of the cultural fruits of advertising described earlier? And if no self-respecting artist would accept such work, then how should societies pay for their art?

For the majority of European history, the best way for artists to earn a living has been some form of patronage. Shakespeare, Beethoven and Michelangelo were maintained principally through the generosity of powerful individuals. And though it may be nice to imagine these patrons as disinterested connoisseurs, it would be dishonest to do so. Their motives lay in the display of wealth, power and taste. In their own way these artists were advertisers too, for the glory of single men rather than the quality of commercial products.

Today, most people would think of art as being primarily financed by its consumers. Since the time of Alexander Pope, the first great English writer to live from the profits of the public, this has become standard practice. Yet critics continue to traduce the popular and promote the obscure. Is it a hidden aristocratic urge that causes this? Or is it a recognition that artistic endeavurour is inevitably corrupted by capitalism?

The record for government-sponsored art is not much better. Whether stuffing struggling turkeys like the Millennium Dome, limiting the freedom of thought which is necessary for great art as twentieth century totalitarians often did, or spending millions on elite-culture painting and sculpture while others go homeless or starving, culture has rarely prospered under state control. I was certainly grateful when one of Blair’s first acts was making museum entrance free, but there’s an implicit snobbery in subsiding ‘high’ culture rather than pop culture that’s never sat right with me.

In all these criticisms, contemporary thought is heavily influenced by the Romantic ideal of the Artist as a special kind of human being. Perhaps thinking about how art is financed is the wrong way to go about the issue; true art is created not for money, but for the sheer joy of creation. This would be a nicely naive idea, but it isn’t really sustainable. It may work for those wealthy enough or committed enough to live the bohemian life, but the rest of us have got to make ends meet. For every artist who creates as an unavoidable part of life, there are plenty more who work for the money or would be forced to move into some kind of paid career without it. Advertising, perhaps.

Advertising is an unrequested, unwanted intrusion into mental and aesthetic space. Banksy calls it ‘brandalism’. Graffiti is considered a selfish act of anti-social behaviour; what, then is advertising? It would seem logical for advertising to be curtailed somehow, yet we have come to accept that our eyes are subjected to billboards without consent or recompense. On the Thames waterfront, for instance, advertisements are banned – a special exception had to be made for the OXO Tower. In 1987 Florida enacted an advertisement-tax, only to be repealed after six months when companies withdrew planned conventions and caused massive losses in tourism revenue for the state.

At the same time, we should not have too parochial an idea of what art is. Art, Advertising and Propaganda are disciplines with blurred boundaries. Every artist has an agenda and an economic context. It would be foolish to deny the creations of beauty we sometimes get through advertising. It is a key part of our culture, whether we like it or not. In the words of Frederick Pohl;
‘Advertising reaches out to touch the fantasy part of people’s lives. And you know, most people’s fantasies are pretty sad.’

Isis party tonight / Isis review

2008tt1isis.jpgAldate is somewhat averse, in a personal capacity at least, to arty-farty illustrated glossies.  Nonetheless, it would be unfair to leave the new editors’ first effort unmarked.

 

So first, please offer your thoughts on the new issue of Isis in the comments below.  Aldate is sure you will have many enlightening points to make without drawing gratuitous attention to ex-editor/current editor romance. 

 

Second, help keep OSPL afloat by attending the Isis launch party at Baby Love Bar, 9pm.  £1 entry means even the editors of the OUSU Access Guide can get in.

 

Oh, and there will be music from the Action Station DJs to drown out conversation from Isis types.{nomultithumb}

Cherwell vs OxStu: Issue 4

 

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Stu had the better story on the front page, but for some bemusing reason drowned it out with a local-press-style picture of someone enjoying themselves.  As Lord Northcliffe said, "News is what somebody somewhere wants to suppress; all the rest is advertising."  More space was given to what is effectively an ad than to a decent bit of FoI’ing.  And the copy was strong, too, at least until the "unacceptably dirty" tin opener was brought into the equation.

Congratulations nonetheless to Miss Buky-Webster: the copy was strong through pages 6-7 too (use of "invite" as a noun aside).  One thing stops this from being a home run: the pisspoor design of the focus pages.  Just kill that template, now.  Inset boxes are meant to hook people into the main copy, but aren’t very good if they’re drowning amongst other copy – colour signposting would be good.  The picture was mediocre – maybe push the boat out with a diagram?  And a key element of an infobox is good info. Corpus Christ?  Harris?  Manchester?

Obviously, the journalism is the most important part and is a resounding success in this case.  But a newspaper is a product and it’s about time the Stu realised that design is as much part of the journalistic process (getting the message across) as writing headlines.

Other StuNews:
2 – yep
3 – a tragic incident, but 3?
4 – yep
5 – Yawnion filler, interesting figures though. Cherwell chose to Evelyn this, so dull is debating society politics. Slightly overegging a 15 minute incident at the SSL.
7 – yep
8 – woah, what do you mean there’s no more news?

Other StuBits:
13-15 – really strong feature
Sport – p34 just looks like The Times 100 years ago.  Stop centring headlines; they look ridiculous.

Oh, and what’s more embarrassing:
a) Printing OxFood twice?
b) Printing OxFood twice, having puffed a (strong-looking) feature that should have gone on one of those pages on the arts FP?
c) Printing OxFood twice within pages of an advert about eating disorders?
d) All of the above?

 

 

Cherwell

Well there’s a tricolon you can’t turn down.  Drugs, clubs and sex on the beach.  You might cringe at the Victorianesque indignation, but as is made clear in the standfirst, these are educational travel grants – money that could be spent, for example, on bursaries or scholarships.

Anonymous quotes seem a bit weak next to council figures, but the story seems to have elicited plenty of lunch table interest ("I’m so getting a travel grant" and other predictable banter).

The FP also marked a welcome departure from normal front page design, while avoiding Independent-style guff.  That said, Aldate implores the editors not to make a habit of this technique.  Nor, indeed, of putting fat people on p1.

Incidentally, guess which Cherwell editor submitted his (honest and sincere) application for a travel grant on the day the paper came out?

Infested kitchens aside, Cherwell had a strong(er?) news week, full of sex pests, JCR betting banter, Wadham allegations and a transparent graph that looks like a college’s annual report.

Oona King vs Widdecombe – who’s the leftie paper now?

20 – A strong fashion piece of fashion writing. Don’t see that often.
Sport – really strong week.

Your verdict needed on:
– the above
– same centerspread, different executions
– fashion